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Thanks for the review. Now to answer its different parts: About the portfolio, I'd put all the chapters in a folder dedicated to Code: Delete , but for some reason, ...

That last stanza hit hard. I was immediately reminded of the book All the Bright Places by Jennifer Niven. Have you read it? I really didn't realize what this poem ...

Yeah, I thought the chapter was a little bland in terms of events. I guess I just needed someone to point out where. I'll go back and make it a ...

Yeah, I switch tenses often in this chapter. This is because I wanted to incorporate parts of her backstory without making separate flashback sections. Thanks for the review!

Um. Hello. I just wanted to point out to you... not to be rude or anything... You spelled "great" wrong every time in your review. It's "great," not "grate."

This is good! It's been a while since I read poetry, so thanks for writing this. Keep writing, Mira

Oh! I just realized... I commented twice by accident. Sorry.

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Woah! This is a very good story, so you don't have much to worry about when it comes to presenting this in your class. Because it is really good, I'm ...

Hey Anma! No, I don't mind you shortening my name. About Ashe thinking in italics, I tried to italicize the actual thoughts. Example: You spoke too soon. The rest just ...

@Swetachowdhury0 @Fantascifi66 @Honora @JadeLotus @Tuckster @Anma @hiraeth You all have, at some point, been interested in this story, and many of you wanted me to tag you for the upcoming ...

Wow. I'd never quite known just how short flash fiction could be until I read this. I don't mean it in a bad way, of course. ^^ Overall, I think ...

Thanks for the review! Also, what is "review day?"

Hey!! Thanks for the review. Sorry for replying so late... I know that I commented here, dunno where that went. You were confused about the characters, right? Ashe is a ...

Thanks for the critiques. I'll go back and fix the chapter. I'll also tag you. Thanks for reading!

(for any new readers) Link to Chapter 1: To people who showed interest in reading: Tags: @Swetachowdhury0 @Fantascifi66 @Honora @JadeLotus @Tuckster @Anma After a 3 week hiatus, Chapter 2 finally ...