Young Writers Society

You're doing really well, Frosting! The boys' relatonship (our main character and his roomie) is quite hilarious. I must say, I am proud of you. With just a website name ...

I really like this. I though the ending was pretty good. From my reading of it, I got the idea that the person is like... sad, I guess. I don't ...

I feel happy to read your poem. As a fantasy writer, not a poet, I can't go all out and give you advice on how to write your works, but ...

Hmmm. Interesting. I like the idea of having a "pretty boy" type within the group. Makes it fun. Anyway, I like it. That's all I can say, because I can't ...

I had to re-read this, because I get lost easily. No worries, not because it's bad, because it is, in fact very good, which is why I got lost. Either ...

I don't go through and get the little things, like grammar and spelling, because if I did, this review would go on forever, but I'll tell you what I thought! ...

Very interesting. I didn't get far because I got distracted by the large noise... BUT, I liked it. I don't even think my review will help much, but there's detail ...

Woo, pretty good. :) Keep going, I am curious to see where this will go. :)

This has caused me to be slower than usual in reviewing as I got so hooked. :P Woah, I just re-read it again, and I'm still just like=...woah. That was ...

Oh boy, this is getting better. I do hope you will keep writing this. This has suspense like I've never seen before. I cannot wait to see what you decide ...

Wow, that gave me mental images and the shivers. Good job, because that , my friend, is hard to do. The last line, gave me the creeps, so again good ...

Oh, wow. I really do like this. Allie sounds like she likes her job, but her boss makes it harder for her. She and Daniel would have made a very ...

This is pretty good. Though, I do agree with MangoTango, the shadows bit confused me. Otherwise, a very good start. Keep writing, I can't wait to read the rest. :)

Well, I found this to be quite interesting. Very detailed. I found it to be interesting because the cover itself I found to be clever. I too, think that your ...