Chevaliar(working title) Chapter 1

by Derek

Published July 19, 2011

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Milaita
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Milaita wrote a review Review · Jul 19, 2011

Hmmm. Interesting. I like the idea of having a "pretty boy" type within the group. Makes it fun. Anyway, I like it. That's all I can say, because I can't mention grammar and things like that because I have a problem with that. So, good luck, and keep going, please. :)



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