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Re: How sad is the peacock!
Wow! I like your poem! The only thing I have to say is that 'weeps' and 'cease' do not rhyme. Keep 'em coming! :)
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Some Haikus
I like your haikus! Especially that they're about nature. I try to write my poems on the same topic because I find it different. Nice work! Keep 'em coming! :)
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: My friend Wacky.
Nice poem! It comes from the heart and I hope this friend of your's has read this and seen how much she means to you! Keep writing! :)
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Oh My Funyuns!( OMG parody)
Oh my gosh! I am liking your parody! You should make a video! xD! I like the fact that you got your funny inspiration from food :D . Keep 'em ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: A Beautiful Illusion
I find this beautiful, especially as it is related to religion. I love your idea of the refrain and find it very meaningful especially as it is repeated. I am ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: The Snow.
Thank you for your reviews, guys! I put the corrections in bold.
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Christmas
A nice and simple poem that reminds us of the joys and splendours of our (my) favourite time of the year! :) I like it!
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets -- Chapter 3 [Sunshine]
I am officially ADDICTED to your novel! Just after watching your trailer, you've got me hooked on you novel! I am loving it! I want more!!!
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: Lilly Evans' diary 3
I love these diary entries! You are most definately a fan! (Like me!!) And I am loving it because it gives us a better idea on the pre-Harry Potter Lily ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Lilly Evans' diary 2
Yes! We're just following the series! I love it!!!
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Lilly evans' diary
Wow! I love this! Especially how you portray Lily and Petunia as little girls before they came into contact with the real magical world!
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: I didn't write this, my friend showed it to me!
:D A South Park Classic! I Love How Kenny Is Always 'Out In The Blue'!
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Photograph to Sand
Nice poem! What attracted me were the first and second lines: Cold, I stand alone. Nice work, keep them coming!
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Kiss me when I'm sober
I really like this poem. I especially like the repetition of "Perhaps" as it shows the person's uncertainty and how he/she tries to persuade yet dissuade themselves. Nice work!
Dec 16, 2010 -
Re: Cartora (Prologue)
Thank you! It's my first time on this site and I just had to write a little something as an opening to this new site. So thank you for your ...
Dec 14, 2010
