Published December 14, 2010
Dear diary
Severus told me all about "Hogwarts" a school i was supposed to be attending to help with my magic, he told me about these Dementors as well. Apparently they guard the Wizard prison Azkaban they scare my, i was slightly worried that i would go to Azkaban for doing that petal thing to Petunia. But Severus said i wouldn't go to Azkaban for that, because it wasn’t bad and i am still underage and when i am eleven i will get to go to Hogwarts and practise magic to learn. i can't wait and me and Severus would be friends for ever i just had one more year and then Hogwarts! But then again i had a fall out with Severus all because my sister was spying on us. He got annoyed because she took the mick out of his shirt i like it, but Petunia asked him if it was his mum's. He got annoyed and made a branch of a tree Petunia was standing under fall on her shoulder. I wasn't happy with him for that! So i waked off leaving him, but i feel so bad so i think i might go to his house soon and say I’m not annoyed with him.
Love Lilly Evans
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Meh. It's okay I suppose. I mean, I like Harry Potter and all, but I'm just not feeling it. Maybe you need to add more, because it's not much to read which makes me want to just click away to a different novel. I'm sorry, but this is tasteless and doesn't do anything for me, so I'm out.
Yes! We're just following the series! I love it!!!
arr charl, were like your devoted fans x <3 love youuuuuuuuuuuu
Again, loveeeeeee the spinoff. The way you took the little parts of Lily and Severus's relationships from the book and turned it into this was great. The storyline is awesome, I just wish they were a little longer so I could keep reading. Haha
Keep writing! Looking forward to more of Lily Evan's Diary entries.
I love this charlotte! i like your dear diary format and i love the innocence of it and how you retain its sweetness even though the audience know the dangers of the things she speaks about. i feel like i know her! you are unquestionably a good writer!
i seriously think you just have a knack for storywriting: your brilliant x
love the best person you've ever met
Oh. NOW I get this whole thing xD
xxx
Harry Potter is awesome, and so is this Charlii
I love this whole "Dear Diary" situation.
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