Midnightmoon

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Yes. Computer glitch. Sorry.

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Really good poem! I loved how you matched the simplicity and feeling. Just a few nitpicks. :) "Maybe then you'll tell me your feeling a few years too slow." I ...

Thanks for reading!

Thanks! I made some edits, so if you want to read again, Please do! :).

Chapter two has been posted, it's called Alex and Rick.

Thank you! I made the edits. Hope it's a little better.

Thank you!

@RavenBlack, Thank you. Can I bother you for another review of my edits that I did, again? :)

Thank you for the review! I have edited my chapter, if you would like to give it another read. :D.

I have edited it! If you would please read it again, I would love any suggestions or remarks. Thank you!

Thank you! Can I let you know when I edit it to get your opinion?

Thank you for the review! In the dream scene, I was trying to have Natalie taunt Kayla. Do you have any ideas as to how I could make that work? ...

Oh my gosh!!! I. LOVE. PIRATES. OF. THE. CARRIBEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Oh my gosh!!! I. LOVE. PIRATES. OF. THE. CARRIBEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!