Midnightmoon

Hello! Mockingjay78 here for a quick review. This is a very nice poem, just have a few suggestions. "A blasting wind, a howling gale, calls forth a malicious storm." That's ...

Very nice poem. Just a few suggestions. First off, maybe break the first part into smaller sections, like this for example; "My mother, Never taught me how to braid my ...

Amazing! I honestly have nothing to say except to keep writing. The imagery is amazing, and for those who don't really like war and are not interested, this poem just ...

I don't have much to say, I do agree with NickItaShiji, but I do have a few things to add. I haven't come across many poems that can, in a ...

Very, very good! I've never come across a poem that describes the pain so well. Just a suggestion, but I think that if this; "Get up boy!” I bawled. Was ...