MidnightVampire

Wow. that was good. scary, it almost made me cry (i'm emotional), kinda reminds me of my mom's x boyfriend. No, he wasn't a murder, just for a different reason. ...

I liked this, had been forgetting to look at it (i'm sorry!) But I liked it (as said before.) Put the past in little by little. The past is always ...

Oh, gosh I love this song. I mean, it looks really fun to sing. (despite the fact of what its about- like iquippie said). It's amazing. I can't write lyrics ...

AAAAaaaahhhhhhh! I really don't get this. Is it sorta the thing i wouldn't get because I'm 12 (if so then i'm really sad.) Wait, is it a joke because he ...

Um.. I don't know if its any better. Maybe just because I never saw the original. There are still a few mistakes,though. (this is going to be really hard by ...

Ok, there's not really a way I can top everyone with all the grammer fixes and spelling and comments that people before me made.I really like this, I like how ...

I don't know... I'm that person that usually doesn't have much of an opinion... Unless, it really eurks me (the other opinion.) Though some matters I can be ver opinionful ...

O gosh- I loved this one. Absolutely loved it. I'm terrible at reviewing poetry, so I hope you have all your comma mistakes and such fixed or edited. I just ...

Gosh, I really liked this. The reall reason I came here is to see what a lyric poem is for writing class and I find this fantastic poem. The last ...

Scared. Scary. Scaries. by the first five sentences I got sick of these words,they sound to much alike and are frequent. Maybe make some of them different, like frightened. this ...

Wow. you got me right from the begining. I agree with the whol "earth thing". I really don't have much to say except I like it. I never am much ...

I liked this. Space out your paragraphs though, it helps people read. So it would be paragraph enter paragraph. It says (I'm typing it because I can't get the stupid ...

Ok, to the person (i'm to lazy to look at the name) who said " most of my dreams are to boring to write down" (or something like that) I ...

Wow, you sound like one of those A students in school ( just by what you said of ' buy i"m going to do more anyway). I really liked this, ...

Ok, I really liked this, a lot. I like the 'Lost. Lost everything'. At first when I read this I was confuzed what you lost, but then when it said ...