"I'm working on a story and am looking to improve; help me improve my work by constructive criticism and correcting any grammar or spelling mistakes I may have."
This story is about a boy who befriended a spirit with mysterious motives.
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Chapter 1: One Gone Another Comes
A week after a young boy lost his grandfather, a spirit came and comforted him. They became friends; but other people felt an ulterior motive.
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Chapter 2: A Survey Won't Hurt
Is this strange?
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Chapter 4: Up in the Attic
What's up? NOTE: This is one of the third person chapters.
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Chapter 5: Homework and Hats (Part 2)
Your conversation with Oliver continues as you talk about their strange past.