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Re: Oh What A Pretty Smile
I loved this poem. It flowed very nicely. I can completely relate to your poem and I love that. However, for every broken girl, their is a time to dance.
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: What made me (I am)
I love this poem, because I understand everything about it. it's amazing how much emotion you stuffed into one poem. It almost made me cry. You are an incredible writer.
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: The Bird
Short, simple, and stupendous, this is one of the best poems I have ever read. I have no critiques, I just wanted to tell you how awesome it is.
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mr. Rapist
Wow, I was hanging onto every word. I could not believe he won in the end. It was chilling and amazing. This story has awesome intensity. You are an awesome ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Run with the wind!
That was a very heartfelt and emotional poem. I was close to crying. I must say thank you for posting this, because I am thankful for being able to read ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Some of The World's Immortal People Are Alive, Some Are Dead
Wow that is an awesome Tanka. I loved how you went through so many people. It was a lot of names, but it was well worth reading.
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: The F.U.N. Song.
I love this it is so cute, and so true.
Jun 4, 2011 -
Re: The Mysterious Girl in Black 1
I loved this story. It was great. My favorite part was when she told him why she did not like him. I liked that part because i completely agree with ...
Jan 28, 2011 -
Re: I Did. This.
All i can say, or I guess type, is wow. This is amazing. I can definitely see how you got first place. Your piece is awesome in every sense of ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: You are science.
This is an amazing poem. It is the first poem I've read on here and liked, because I finally figured out how too. It is definitely a great poem. I ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Argument of the Fried Brains
I love this poem. I wish I could write something that good out of something like that, but I'm not that talented. I really like this poem, just because it ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter, Voldemort and a cookie.
That is hilrous. (Sorry the spellcheck's not working) I thought it was really cute and funny. Though it would be nice to know how Hermonie showed up at the end, ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Breathe Again...
I love this poem especially these last lines. "And so I take the words Take the lyrics Close the book Breathe again..." It was kind of confusing, but that's probably ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: My Inner Child Ran Away :(
This story is amazing and so true. When you desperately want to hang on to childhood, you are forced to let it go. I wish sometimes we could go back ...
Nov 21, 2010