MiaParamore

I would love to read the story if you give a rating to it.Please!!!!!!!!!

Thank you for reviewing my work.

Hi, It was beautiful with no flaws that I could see.You were such aa great writer at the age of sixteen also.keep writing!!!!! IS this all or you have more ...

Hi Horselover, Are there any other parts of this story that I need to read before reading this one.Please PM me. :D

Hi Flyinginebony, I want to read the story but the 16 rating is stopping me so Iwant to know if there's nothing except for violence then PM me.Although you have ...

Hey all, No one has read this chapter yet.Please read it and leave a note.

Hi lucy97, Welcome to YWS.I hope you'll enjoy a lot. I think your story was okay-okay.You don't use capital 'I'while referring to the narrator.I can give you a name after ...

Can't wait to read the next post.Complete it quickly!!!!!!

Hi horselovergo12 Thank you for going through the story.I hope you get more time to read other chapters.The thing you pointed out is exactly what I am worried about.I know ...

Thank you all for liking my work and telling me how I could really improve it.I'll definitely work on the points.

I liked the story,the plot.Your description of Selena is in my head but not much about the narrator is being told.Considering your age,I think you are writing.You have a long ...

Hi tam-ara. The story was nice to read but honestly speaking I have watched a similar Hindi film and have read a similar story.But your description was beautiful.