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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Torn Veil (Part 1 of 3)

    Hey there Jane. You know whenever I read your name I just get the Princess Diaries image in front of my eyes with Mia having same surname. :D This is ...

    May 25, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Man Who Can't Be Moved.

    Hi darkangel_05. Here to review another piece of your Romantic story. First off you need to capitalize the title. It should read like this: The Man Who Can't Be Moved. ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Déjà Vu

    Hi. Here to review! A foreboding alleyway near his target on a crowded street in Toronto: perfect. Perfect line to start with! :) Too bad all of his impatience will ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Fearless (Edited)

    Hey Yuriko. What's up? Well here to review, of course. I felt negative vibes flowing through my veins. My heart sank with anger and rejection. My eyes wandered throughout his ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Story, The Song, and The Picture (prolouge)

    Hi Darkangel_05. Here to review. This is the first time I saw a guy writing in the Romantic section. Finally, summer's coming. I don't know why but this sentence forced ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: But we were happy

    Hi Vera. I have been seeing you around here a lot, but I never got a chance to read your work. So here I am. I was lying through my ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Black Widow

    Hey there. This was nicely written but I understood nothing. The style of your writing is perfect like in second person but it seemed so much of a mess. She ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: I Don't Want to Die

    Hey Skins. I promised you that I would review it this morning and now it is...10:48 AM. Haha :lol:. Well here to review for you. Also, I googled this book-Private ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Daniel's Way-Chapter 2-(Critiques Needed!)

    I'm back here again, Arya. Again I would like if you could bold the title of the chapter. And also, you have good titles and names to the chapters. I ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Daniel's Way-Chapter 1- (Critiques Welcome)

    Hi there Arya. I'll be your reviewer for today. I hope I can help, even if its a bit. Daniel's Way is the story of a disturbed young man who ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Let Me Love You(4)

    Hey Tiffany. Here again. I thought that I would read every chapter but not post a review, but then I badly wanted to review something and I felt reviewing it. ...

    May 23, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Saved on the Killer Mountain- Chapter One

    Hey Emily. I loved this story so far. I wanted to do the review a while before but hen I thought it would be boring as its religious(No offence). But ...

    May 23, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Confessions of a pissed off teen on suicide watch *Edit!!*

    Hi Jasmine, here to review. I saw that you posted it again and edited it so I just wanted to check out. I hd thought since it was edited, there ...

    May 19, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Failure

    Hi Jasmine! Here to review your program again though I still suck at it and you rock at poetry. Kind of a poetry! :D I must say that this was ...

    May 19, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Let Me Love You(2)

    Hi Tiffany. Here to review: Jay’s feelings for Isabella had once been so strong, but now it seemed like it all was leaking away. I just thought that 'was leaking' ...

    May 18, 2010


Be happy, my friend; and if you obey me in this one request, remain satisfied that nothing on earth will have the power to interrupt my tranquility.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein