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Re: The Magi {ch. 3}
Hey. I am back again. So this is short, so I guess it'd be easier to nitpick it. I would have to disagree with Pari(sorry, dear), but what I feel ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {ch. 2}
Hey Point. Here again. Hope I'll be able to deliver some more help this time. For the beginning in this chapter, I think there could not have been anything better. ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {Ch. 1}
Hey there Point! “You know the answer to that question , Kevin Price.” When you refer to a person directly, then you have a comma after or before the name, ...
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: Wishes Enveloped In Paper Aeroplanes
Hey Ice. Okay I am here to review as a co-judge and as a reviewer on request. I'll review it right now, and if you later change some things, then ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: The Power of Pop Secret
Hey Bubbles. Sorry I took so long. I don't think I have much to say, but I'll try-honestly. Now wow. Your story telling style is wondrous and I didn't have ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
Hey Bel, how are you? Sorry I am a bit late. But I'll try to make up for it. The weak and the strong, the courageous and the meek - ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 4)
Hey Skins. I am back! :wink: With my eyes shut, I prepared for whatever was to happen to me next to happen. This whole part was off. I think you ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Inspiration where'd you go? *Edited*
Hey Kaka! When I said I'd review, I had thought this to be some fiction piece, but then later it's a poem. *faints* Asking me for a review on it ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Lost+Found: Chapter 2: Housebreaking
Hey Tenyo. Shubhi's back again! *waves* Again I have to commend you for your simple, but captivating opening line. You were very good with that. I really, and seriously liked ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 3)
Hey Skins. I haven't read what others have said, so sorry if I repeat myself. :smt002 I really liked your this chapter, and it's true. I really didn't find much ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 1: When Love Comes Knocking
Hey Tenyo. I am here to review. I won't review all the chapters, but try to do the ones where you don't have many reviews, so it becomes helpful for ...
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 2)
Hey Skins. Never say that I should review if I want to. You wish and I am there. Never say that. I have to review,; I'd never say 'no' to ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Nathaniel Stone, Anarchist
Hey Megan there. Shrubbery here as a co-judge of Skins' She's the Man contest. I would here review you and try to be of some help. I was a boy ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Story of the dead
Hey Retro. Shrubs here as a jury member of Skins' contest-She's the Man! Hey! It was the day before. Before what? I was entitled to one week every month, so ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: You could have (edited)
Hey Yuri! How's you? Okay, so here is a co-judge of Skins' exclusive She's the Man contest. I'd now review you plus judge you right here on the basis of ...
Dec 28, 2010