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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Awake Part 4

    Sometimes there are characters that aren't really a big part of the story, but they can still grab your attention with their actions.

    Aug 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Awake Part 1

    No suggestions at the moment, but I'm writing a book entitled Is It a Dream. In my book I'm outside one day playing in the woods when I slip and ...

    Aug 31, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If A Thought Is Worth A Penny...

    That was amazing! So many emotions so perfectly described. Sad but hopeful at the same times with a powerful message. Great job, you have a gift at this.

    Aug 31, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Fat Cat

    Haha. Very funny poem. My family has a cat and it isn't very fat, but it has a ton of fluffy hair that makes her look real big.

    Aug 31, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Hope.

    Short and great! I can just see the darkness, then in the center a small speck of light begins to form, eventually bursting forth into colorful rays of light. A ...

    Aug 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Awake Part 3

    Still enjoying. I like how you've portrayed Jenna, Beth, and Shara so far.

    Aug 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Awake Part 2

    This is the first story I've ever read that was written from two people's first-person point of view, but it's great. The suspense it great. I can't wait to see ...

    Aug 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Awake Part 2

    This is the first story I've ever read that was written from two people's first-person point of view, but ti's great. The suspense it great. I can't wait to see ...

    Aug 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A Battle of Brethren

    This was quick entertaining read. The pace was quick the characters were quite realistic in their speech and attitudes towards each other. I wasn't sure if the brothers were merely ...

    Aug 31, 2013


It usually takes more than three weeks to prepare a good impromptu speech.
— Mark Twain