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Re: Awake Part 4
Sometimes there are characters that aren't really a big part of the story, but they can still grab your attention with their actions.
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Re: Awake Part 1
No suggestions at the moment, but I'm writing a book entitled Is It a Dream. In my book I'm outside one day playing in the woods when I slip and ...
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Re: If A Thought Is Worth A Penny...
That was amazing! So many emotions so perfectly described. Sad but hopeful at the same times with a powerful message. Great job, you have a gift at this.
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Re: Fat Cat
Haha. Very funny poem. My family has a cat and it isn't very fat, but it has a ton of fluffy hair that makes her look real big.
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Re: Hope.
Short and great! I can just see the darkness, then in the center a small speck of light begins to form, eventually bursting forth into colorful rays of light. A ...
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Re: Awake Part 3
Still enjoying. I like how you've portrayed Jenna, Beth, and Shara so far.
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Re: Awake Part 2
This is the first story I've ever read that was written from two people's first-person point of view, but it's great. The suspense it great. I can't wait to see ...
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Re: Awake Part 2
This is the first story I've ever read that was written from two people's first-person point of view, but ti's great. The suspense it great. I can't wait to see ...
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Re: A Battle of Brethren
This was quick entertaining read. The pace was quick the characters were quite realistic in their speech and attitudes towards each other. I wasn't sure if the brothers were merely ...
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