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OK, but I am the author who is reviewing, so i am entitled to tell you what I think of your review.

From previous chapters, or from your new chapter?

Thanks, it worked.

I have to say you're a very encouraging reviewer. I'll look at the sentence you mentioned, and perhaps add a bit about when I fall. Maybe about being unconscious and ...

What exactly do you mean in the way of imagery. i mean these are mostly just thoughts I have.

Thank you so much GriffinClaw, that means a lot. I suspect this is the first of several reviews I'll be receiving in the near future. :)

your review is on the wrong chapter now. :)

Alright, thanks for the help.

BTW, i think I do know how much a review means. :)

You're welcome. for the pipe thing really helps to show your MC's thought process down, there and how dangerous it is. Glad it helped.

Not to be mean, but i think it might for the writer of this story to be able to understand your review easily, which means you should probably fix all ...

I'm marking this as a to-read sometime later. From a couple reviews I saw it'll be good. Your writing usually is.

Don't feel pressured to leave a like; this is just a reminder if you meant to but forgot. I don't want to pressure you to like it. :)

And by the way Imhero, if you want someone to actually take your review too seriously, I would try to use a more tactful beginning and ending. it really doesn't ...

For some reason I can't get spaces in between the stanza breaks. I've tried it several times but it doesn't save it. I'm not sure why.