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Thank you so much GriffinClaw, that means a lot. I suspect this is the first of several reviews I'll be receiving in the near future. :)

your review is on the wrong chapter now. :)

Alright, thanks for the help.

BTW, i think I do know how much a review means. :)

You're welcome. for the pipe thing really helps to show your MC's thought process down, there and how dangerous it is. Glad it helped.

Not to be mean, but i think it might for the writer of this story to be able to understand your review easily, which means you should probably fix all ...

I'm marking this as a to-read sometime later. From a couple reviews I saw it'll be good. Your writing usually is.

Don't feel pressured to leave a like; this is just a reminder if you meant to but forgot. I don't want to pressure you to like it. :)

And by the way Imhero, if you want someone to actually take your review too seriously, I would try to use a more tactful beginning and ending. it really doesn't ...

For some reason I can't get spaces in between the stanza breaks. I've tried it several times but it doesn't save it. I'm not sure why.

OK, thanks a lot ED. I don't know how much I will change this all, but as with my sunset poem, this is the first feed back I've gotten, so ...

Thanks Dreamy, please continue reading if you like the story. And if you really like it please leave a like.

OK, Imhero, I like this poem the way it is, and other than a few changes I'll keep it the way it is. What I wrote is from what God ...

Thanks a lot. :)

The last four lines are supposed to a separate stanza from the other. That is why the last one is so long. Thanks for the review and like.:)