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yes go read the next chapter it'll help clear things up.

indeed it does!

hi Stella! Thanks for the review! :) To be honest I am not quite sure where the plot is going :P but i am definitely not spending a third chapter ...

glad to help! I'll be back soon for more chapters.

so when i finally stop being lazy i can get it on my wall :P

the link

post this on my wall

hey Laure, thanks for the wonderful review! I must admit I am surprised at myself. I have long since rid m habit of writing short sentences (I'm saying this because ...

ok, thanks! *Adds to list of followers*

thanks for the review! I intend to give more detail of Jumper in the next chapter because I myself felt like their wasn't enough description, so if you stick with ...

i shall beat you to the finish lines *runs off*

Completely understand! :)

glad to hear you say all these things. I have a prologue, but upon reconsideration I'm going to cut it. You would possibly understand Castor more if you read it, ...

ah, so i wasn't too far off. Sadly, a lot of what you wrote is ALREADY happening. I don't think you need to say "the future" I don't understand what ...

any examples or suggestions?