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Gwyn issss fantastic. I love writing her. I use the terms monster as a general term here for animals that in Velhurland (Astoria Sadoria) are just scary. Kind of like ...

Hey Blue, thanks for being so fast with these reviews and for sticking with them :D Magic doesn't really exist in this world that people know of. Later on you'll ...

Hey Clari, thanks for reviewing :) Yep, never gonna change that avvie I thhink. I've seriously been deliberating a prologue, even thought of doing it as a side project during ...

Hey, this isn't a review although I read the essay in its entirety, but I will say that I think if you have sources for the numerous claims you state ...

hey, bluuuue thanks for the review. If you read my author's note last week I mentioned how I'm going to rewrite the beginning of the story. A lot more about ...

haha I guess it's just the price to pay for actually planning and worldbuilding beforehand instead of doing it on the go and learning it as the audience does

Thanks Blue. I agree with most of what you're saying. The POV switch is just me struggling to figure out how to balance how this bit is viewed. I want ...

Haha the baby thing isn't anything to die over so xD

Hey, thanks for being so fast! Yes this is for 5 and 6. I didn't want to waste points splitting up the chapter since it all goes together. The bit ...

hahaha I'm sorry XD That would be a problem

hahaha I'm sorry XD That would be a problem

malcolm's dad o.O

hey dood :D :D thanks for stopping by. first off I don't know why, but the fight scene reminded me of the one in Mulan where the Hun army is ...

thanks Bisc! I'll definitely make a note about her mom. She is bitter at life, and there's a lot that goes into it. this isn't really a spoiler so I'll ...

Hey Blue thanks for such a fast review :D I will say that I really wanted to make this chapter long enough to have Carris and Devlin meet (and they ...