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haha I actually thought you would like this fight scene because it moves the plot forward as they say, but I agree with what you say about Devlin's character being ...

hey again/ Gwyn is just a little bit younger than carris like 14 to 16 respectively. But she has a very motherly take care of others attitude. I'll look into ...

thanks for the review. I just decided to rate every chapter that rating, since some chapters/will contain a lot of violence.

okay, i can see that. I'll keep that in mind. Thanks for the point out

Thank you blue. I'm slightly confused on what you're saying about Malcolm? Everyone in the town kinda feels like Devlin showed up then Potter's Creek got burnt to a crisp ...

Gwyn issss fantastic. I love writing her. I use the terms monster as a general term here for animals that in Velhurland (Astoria Sadoria) are just scary. Kind of like ...

Hey Blue, thanks for being so fast with these reviews and for sticking with them :D Magic doesn't really exist in this world that people know of. Later on you'll ...

Hey Clari, thanks for reviewing :) Yep, never gonna change that avvie I thhink. I've seriously been deliberating a prologue, even thought of doing it as a side project during ...

Hey, this isn't a review although I read the essay in its entirety, but I will say that I think if you have sources for the numerous claims you state ...

hey, bluuuue thanks for the review. If you read my author's note last week I mentioned how I'm going to rewrite the beginning of the story. A lot more about ...

haha I guess it's just the price to pay for actually planning and worldbuilding beforehand instead of doing it on the go and learning it as the audience does

Thanks Blue. I agree with most of what you're saying. The POV switch is just me struggling to figure out how to balance how this bit is viewed. I want ...

Haha the baby thing isn't anything to die over so xD

Hey, thanks for being so fast! Yes this is for 5 and 6. I didn't want to waste points splitting up the chapter since it all goes together. The bit ...

hahaha I'm sorry XD That would be a problem