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  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Detachment

    Here to review for KotGR. This was a very nice short story. It had a lot of emotion, and for your age it was very excellently written. I thought you ...

    Sep 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Wanderlust

    Here to give you the third Knights of the Green Room review for our library. So the bad first. This poem seemed a little confusing. First off I didn't know ...

    Sep 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Untitled Work 3

    This review is for the honor and glory of the Knights of the Green Room Now, this poem was well written. It all rhymed good, you have a talent for ...

    Sep 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: The Masked

    Knight Malachi here to review for the nights of the green room. This poem was spooooooooooky! I love the main line, 'the man with the mask.' That was a a ...

    Sep 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: The Ghost

    Knight Malachi here to review. This is a creepy poem. But understandably so since it's a bout a ghost. So, your rhyming was superb . . . until stanza three. ...

    Sep 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Politics Re: Kingdom Come

    Here to get a Green Room Knight review badge. I would suggest putting a star next to the name Eoferwic, and then at the bottom put how to pronounce it. ...

    Sep 23, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Paxton Chapter one

    Knight Malachi here to review. I don't think I would have previously been able to read all this before, but I am trying to be a good Green Room reviewer ...

    Sep 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Twelve Years: Just One More

    Knight Malachi here to review. His hand went into his pocket and pulled out a pack of ice breakers that he proceeded to shovel in his mouth like a polar ...

    Sep 22, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: The Assassin- Part 3

    Here to review is Malachi, Knight of the Green Room. I will post a problem if I see it, and come with a summary at the end. I waited until ...

    Sep 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: "Follow Your Dreams"

    Malachi, Knight of Vindale here to review for the Knight of the Green Room. So this was short, powerful, and to the point. But I feel you completely left out ...

    Sep 21, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A gentle fear.

    OK, kind of really creepy poem here. Her's my review as I said. This poem is really scary, and you did a good job of creating a sense of fear ...

    Sep 21, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bye Bye, Big Blue

    OK, here to review as promised. Or did I promise? Anyway. This poem is well written, although I don't care for free-verse poems as much as rhyming ones, this one ...

    Sep 21, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Endless: Part V

    Here to review as a Knight of the Green Room. Great suspense, I noticed you have some of your dialogue that should be in separate lines, but other than that ...

    Sep 21, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Endless: Part IV

    Here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. Glad to see part 4 is finally here. So I noticed right off that you have a dialogue line within ...

    Sep 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Beast

    Here to review for the Knight of the Green Room This poem obviously has two different sides, but it was very well written and rhymed almost perfectly except for the ...

    Sep 20, 2013


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