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Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. So this is a truthful message. Thankfully in my church I do not see this, but I know ...

Knight Malachi of the Green Room Knights, here to review. So this was a beautiful poem. I loved your imagery and descriptive language. It was a very nice message. You ...

Knight Malachi hahaha here to hahaha review. So this is a fast, short, funny poem. And one that isn't so unrealistic. (Inside joke) I love your character's attitude, as well ...

Knight Malachi here to review. So this was rhyming well until the Death Valley line. Suddenly it didn't rhyme for a couple lines, and threw me off, as well as ...

Knight Malachi here to review take two. This was so much better. It allowed the reader to understand fully where and what was going on, as well as not having ...

Here to review for my 35th review as a Knight of the Green Room. @Hannah So this chapter doesn't seem too bad, but it could use a lot more description. ...

Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. I will post problems I see, or things I really like in order as I read them. So ...

Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. Wow! This poem has so much descriptive, imaginative, metaphoric writing. It was beautiful. I loved the whole thing. ...

Reviewing for the Knights of the Green Room be Knight Malachi. He looked really shinny to Xaba. Xaba has never seen a Very-bright-body-soul before, he only heard of them from ...

Knight Malachi to review. This is definitely poetic. Like Dreamy said it could probably go to music as well. Lots of songs are made from poetry. So since it is ...

Knight Malachi to review for the Knights of the Green Room. So I saw that every time you have I, it is not capitalized. i left you lying on the ...

Knight Malachi here to review for the Knight of the Green Room. So this chapter wasn't at all what I was expecting . . . let's just skip to the ...

Here to review is none other then the one and only Knight Malachi. So this is one of the 2 haiku's I'v read on here. The other one was very ...

Knight Malachi here to Review for the Knights of the Green Room. Alright, so this divided is SO much better. It allows the reader to not fee like reading your ...

Here as a Green Room knight. A Special World. I loved that poem. your metaphor of the cocoon was really cool, and done very well. I liked the whole poem, ...