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Re: The Book Man, Chapters 15-16 (Revised)
And I'm back! My team needs more points and I wouldn't be getting very many for the amount of stuff I wrote so yeah . . . .hey at least ...
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Re: The Book Man, Chapters 15-16 (Revised)
Messenger here once again!Man I have the same intro every time, I really ought to work on that :P But that would be cheating if I made it longer and ...
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Re: The Book Man, Chapter 14 (Revised)
Messenger here for you again!!!! And I can't wait to see what comes next! I forgot to tell you this last time, but I really like your use of chapters. ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 12-13 (Revised)
Messenger here for you again! I just realized I'll soon be reading the twentieth chapter and I can't believe it! This story is just reeling me in so I can't ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 11 (Revised)
Messenger back for you and it looks like I finally passed Deanie! Not that you care but . . . yeah. So shall we get down to business. . . ...
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Re: The Book Man, Chapters 9-10 (Revised)
Messenger back for more! RAWR!! So I can't wait to see Conrad's tale. Let's get into this. Conrad grinned. “Oh, I’m a young man in my prime. I’ll be—let’s see—one ...
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Re: The Book Man, Chapter 8 (Revised)
Messenger back after a short break from your wonderful story! So let's get back to business for the Scarlet Swords birdsong . First time I've ever heard that word but ...
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Re: Godly
Messenger here for you. Well I agree with KnightTeen on two things: I don't like your attitude in this poem because I am a Christian, but I d respect your ...
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Re: Title
Messenger here for you on an exciting Review Day! So I am guessing the crazy line break-ups and choppy lines are a mistake. IF the aren't you need to fix ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 7 (Revised)
Messenger here for you . . .again. Getting tired of me? Too bad if you are because I AM NOT LEAVING UNTIL AT LEAST CONRAD GETS HELP. Actually I am ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 6 (Revised)
And I'm back! You know you are providing me with plenty of material to get points for my team! But in all honesty I was searching for a book to ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 5 (Revised)
Guess who's back? :P Messenger here for you again on this exciting Review Day! heavy padlock hung from the park gate. I really like these one-line sentences. They command attention ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 3-4 (Revised)
Messenger here for you again Blue! This better be good :p Oh boy I was totally not expecting this at all Blue! I thought it would be more of a ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 2 (Revised)
Messenger here for chapter 4, and to be honest I'm nearly bouncing in my seat I'm so excited! It is so awesome to find such well-written, nearly mistake-free writing! Nonetheless ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 1 (Revised)
Messenger here to review for you. I'll be reviewing b sections. Chapter one I got two things to say. Number one, that was just so beautifully detailed and explained in ...
Mar 30, 2014