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Hey Fiend I'm here as you requested! Let's get down to business. I almost started singing the song "Let's get down to business" from Mulan :) (unless you have, and ...

Messenger here for a review of the first chapter I have to say that it looks like the other reviewers covered most of the grammar an punctuation nitpicks so I''ll ...

bahahahahahah. . . .ahahahah. . . . AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Oh my WORD! *Has been laughing the whole time is reading* Phew! this is spectacular Pomps. I mean most of the comment ...

Messenger here to review for you! “Dammit Anika! You can’t leave me! You’re supposed to be here ten years later and embarrass me in front of my kids telling them ...

Messenger here for you. I see a pearl at the bottom of the river. It is sleek and it shines like silver, and its head is crowned by soft-grained sand. ...

Messenger here to review for you on Review Day! So I have to say that I think you captured being a ghost perfectly. I don't know if that is who ...

Messenger here to review for you! And I- WHOOOOOA! Tha-th-that was such a shocking ending. I wasn't expecting it at all! Well done there. I have to say that your ...

Messenger here to review for you! Uh. . . . I have to say I am a little confused. The very first line runs straight from the title, but I ...

Messenger here to review for you! I will tell you this, I saw hardly any, if any, problems technicality-wise in this chapter. IT is a smooth read. Not to hard ...

Messenger here to review! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! It is back!! *Starts up chant* Oh sorry. Calms down. OK, now to the review. My long black hair has grown stringy from lack of ...

oh my word my mom started knocking on something halfway through reading this. I nearly jumped it scared me so bad. :D. but this was really good. I loved how ...

Messenger here for you! Lucrezia I believe this is one of your first works that I have ever reviewed, and I have to say that this was a good one! ...

Messenger here to review for you after an exhilarating Review Day! Oh.My.Word.I.Don't.Know.What.To.Say. I mean seriously you wrote everything about temptation perfectly. I liked the part with the blan

Messenger here to review for you, and for the Cobalt Critiquers! It was a girl, the long hair gave that away easily, and her face was largely obscured by dirt, ...

Messenger here for you. I thought I'd be fair and continue reading at least the next chapter to make sure my first impression was not misplaced. So! “I knocked a ...