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Re: And now I just sit in silence
Messenger here to do one last review for Review Day! Man this was an incredibly well-written poem. Very powerful with no grammar or punctuation mistakes that I could see. M ...
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Re: The Book Man, Chapter 25 (Revised)
Messenger is back for another review or two for you! I briefly saw something about action in Rydia's review so I am pretty pumped for this chapter!Let's gat started! Liza ...
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Re: An Everyday Princess
Messenger here for you. So I clicked on this, interested my your description, and I can't say I was disappointed. Now, I was not expecting it to be Cinderella (I ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Refurbish the Menace
Messenger here to review for you on ReivewDay! This whole poem just flowed perfectly. I only have one nitpick When he was a lad He always thought he'd amount to ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Mr.Fellows
Messenger here to review for you on a crazy Review Day! I have to agree with Iggy that this started feeling forced. . . about the third stanza. you started ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: File: Unnamed #1234456
Messenger here to give you a review on Review Day!So let's get this done!! And I don't have a whole lot to say on this poem other than the fact ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Textbooks and Fairytales
Messenger here to review for you! Happy Review Day! Oh and I don't do a lot of poetry reviewing so I may not be a whole lot of help. If ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Alice Returns To Wonderland (Part One)
Messenger here to give you a really quick review so it may have some typos. Well this was a really neat poem! You have perfect rhyming, like one-hundred percent. I ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 24 (Revised)
Messenger here reviewing for chapter 39 and such. Well Review Days is ridiculously close and I am really stressed out but trying to concentrate. There isn't much to say about ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 23 (Revised)
Messenger here for you for a review or two!!!! This chapter already looks like something really bad has happened! Christian threw a hand over his mouth as nausea rose within ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 21-22 (Revised)
Messenger here for as Review is getting tight as we near the finish line!!!! And all of a sudden I realized I'm already at chapter 31!!! OOO_OOO so . . ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 18-20 (Revised)
It be Messenger back for more because I just can't resist your writing, and my team need some more points to keep the lead! :P So shall we begin? A ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 17 (Revised)
And I am back for the second chapter. These one are actually a little longer than some of your previous ones but still a nice easy size to read, digest, ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 17 (Revised)
I'm back to do another review on each chapter for you, and I am dying of curiosity. And worrying. So without further ado let's begin! At the back, sitting in ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 15-16 (Revised)
Messenger back for once last time! I am super-duper excited to see the garden awake. Ever since Christian entered I was hoping we would see it, and then when the ...
Mar 30, 2014