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Re: The Book Man, Chapters 9-10 (Revised)
Messenger back for more! RAWR!! So I can't wait to see Conrad's tale. Let's get into this. Conrad grinned. “Oh, I’m a young man in my prime. I’ll be—let’s see—one ...
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Re: The Book Man, Chapter 8 (Revised)
Messenger back after a short break from your wonderful story! So let's get back to business for the Scarlet Swords birdsong . First time I've ever heard that word but ...
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Re: Godly
Messenger here for you. Well I agree with KnightTeen on two things: I don't like your attitude in this poem because I am a Christian, but I d respect your ...
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Re: Title
Messenger here for you on an exciting Review Day! So I am guessing the crazy line break-ups and choppy lines are a mistake. IF the aren't you need to fix ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 7 (Revised)
Messenger here for you . . .again. Getting tired of me? Too bad if you are because I AM NOT LEAVING UNTIL AT LEAST CONRAD GETS HELP. Actually I am ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 6 (Revised)
And I'm back! You know you are providing me with plenty of material to get points for my team! But in all honesty I was searching for a book to ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 5 (Revised)
Guess who's back? :P Messenger here for you again on this exciting Review Day! heavy padlock hung from the park gate. I really like these one-line sentences. They command attention ...
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Re: The Book Man, Chapters 3-4 (Revised)
Messenger here for you again Blue! This better be good :p Oh boy I was totally not expecting this at all Blue! I thought it would be more of a ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 2 (Revised)
Messenger here for chapter 4, and to be honest I'm nearly bouncing in my seat I'm so excited! It is so awesome to find such well-written, nearly mistake-free writing! Nonetheless ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 1 (Revised)
Messenger here to review for you. I'll be reviewing b sections. Chapter one I got two things to say. Number one, that was just so beautifully detailed and explained in ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Faded Memories Chapter 1
Hi soul it's your amazingly awesome, super cool, really-good-at-reviewing, epic . . . .well you get the idea. I'm here to review for you. Not even the quick actions of ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Crossroads
Messenger here for you! Wow. And I don't say it because I am a Christian so I am biased in my thoughts. I said it before I relized where you ...
Mar 17, 2014 -
Re: Zom-Brawl
Messenger here to review as you requested! The weave of the rail tracks nearby now housing the numerous spectators thirsty for action. That is not a complete sentence. You are ...
Mar 17, 2014 -
Re: Past, Present, Future
Messenger here to review as you requested! Wow. So this whole poem was just so well written. It flowed really, really well, and it was just a beautiful work of ...
Mar 17, 2014 -
Re: Review nice or don't review at all.
I'm sorry but I thought this flowed really choppy. I'm not a poem expert so it may just be me not reading it right, but the rhymes were really out ...
Mar 14, 2014
