Mercyemptyinme

This is a really sweet poem :) I think it's been said many times already, but this is a very clever poem. At first I thought the poem was from ...

Hi there Rosalie, First off I want to say that I absolutely loved this story :) I think you're right about all the heavy stuff that we focus on, and ...

Retrodisco, I didn't know what to expect when I read this or that it would be about someone you lost, but I've read it multiple times now :smt001 The emotions ...

Hey! I'm glad you posted this, I've been waiting for it :smt001 Here are a couple quick grammar mistakes that happened when you were typing this up: how can know ...

This poem is short, sweet, and absolutely wonderful. I loved every bit of it, and like Mizz, I think the first four lines are the best. They pulled me in, ...

I've read a lot of lyrics from people I know, and I've just had to smile and say they were great, but for these lyrics I can sincerely say :smt001 ...

While I do think this poem would be good without all the "I carry" lines, I think it is still good now and I understand that you were mimicking a ...

I think this is probably my favorite poem that you've written so far (that I've read anyway) because it really makes me think. I do agree that you should experiment ...

I like that this poem focuses on the history side of things :) I learned a lot from it. Keep up the good work! :D

Hi Dante! So first I'll start off with the little grammar things... I see a woman who's life should be in ruins You would want to change the "who's" to ...

Abigail, I agree with Lava...this is a very cute story! I could just picture the story in my head the whole time I was reading it, and I'm not sure ...

Hi there Jane, First of all I'd like to say that I really enjoyed this piece. The title drew me in at first because it's a big life experience for ...

GoldenQuill - I thought this was a great piece! I was interested until the very end, and the fact that it has a dark, sad tone to it makes it ...