Meoiu

Winter doesn't necessarily have snow and cold weather. Vietnam is a tropical country, even in the winter, it doesn't get that cold. Thank you for taking the time to read ...

Thanks kyllorac! Yeah, I kept feeling like I was still missing something, that it wasn't complete, and not thanks to your review, on top of pinkemongirl's I have a better ...

Hihi, thanks a lot Aley. I really appreciate it, and okay, I'll revise it and see where I can improve the attraction, and the hook. ^_^

Thanks so much for the advice! I'll revise it. ^^

thanks a lot! oops, i must have overlooked it. It was a bit forced >_< cause it's a sonnet, and i was running out of ideas to make it rhyme ...

lol ... it's a sonnet. That's why the rhyme scheme is that way. ^^ thank for the helpful advice though!

Haha thank you so much! Lol, yeah at first, I wrote it in a completely different pov ... then suddenly had a new idea, changed it, and when i revised ...

she's stuck between 2 "worlds" isn't she. trying to be who she wants to be yet having to live up to others expectations. no one knows how much she's hurting, ...

Lol, it's cute. But the reason of why he left and suddenly decided to come back was a bit rushed and ended up not making too much sense. Even though, ...

Very well written. Makes the world seem even more twisted and cruel doesn't it? Anyone who dies suspiciously, is turned into some sort of hero, or perfect role model, and ...