Megrim

Hello, I didn't forget about you! I've been staring at this all week, and I think it's just plain been too long since I had to do a school essay. ...

No worries! Tome-sized replies are necessary sometimes XD I feel your pain with the "lazy writing" thing. When it's just you and your lonesome, it's kinda like... "weeelll, it's not ...

I'm going to second all these points!

:D Thank you. Or you're welcome? One of those!

You can put some of that stuff in between action/dialogue, too. Like, spread it out, so the information is still there, but in smaller dollops.

A think a brief introduction would be fine. I just wouldn't wait more than 2-3 paragraphs before getting the scene rolling.

Thanks for the review!

That's so weird! I could have sworn I did all 7, but yeah, I haven't read any of that one. I'll get right on it.

Alas, there is no more. But I guess that means it did a good job, since it made it seem like it could fill out a whole story :P

The ending is really abrupt and unexplained... wasn't sure if it could still work, but I ought to explain more I think!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks! Love the cat photo, btw ^^

Yeah, I had more voicey dialogue for both them, but quite a bit of it to get under wordcount. I had a feeling I may have cut out too much ...

Thanks for the review! Really interesting perspective. I hadn't thought about it that way at all. That doesn't mean it's wrong! I like leaving it open/keeping quiet about the intent, ...

Oh sure! Any rewrite suggestions are free for use.