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How is Stargirl weird? I mean, she's weird, but how is it a weird book?

I haven't. What's it about? Did you like it?

I really hate to correct you, but Christianity has never started any confilcts, neither has atheism, however communistic (godless) regimes have killed far more than most wars which is a ...

Her azure eyes fluttered open as streams of warm sunlight fell across her face. As I said last time: azure eyes would be kind-of weird. Azure ≠ blue, especially the ...

I try not to leave these kinds of reviews, but I wanted to let you know that I'm slowly working my way through editing/critiquing/reviewing this, and I'll post it as ...

You wrote: “Adromeda Tonks,” said Tonks. She had a manner of speaking that, to Ishtar, implied that she thought people should know all of this already ---------------- If I remember ...

A cliché is something that's so overused that it stops being interesting, unless it's used in parody (and those eventually become cliché, too). An example would be "once upon a ...

I like it, except the almost-rhyme between "hell" and "full" rubs me the wrong way. Is there any way you could re-word it to avoid that? (You don't have to, ...

Then maybe I should modify that to "keep poems in one language"*? I mean, normally you'd assume your audience only speaks one language, no? If you must keep the Japanese, ...

Otaku is my general term for someone who enjoys anime (and/or manga). I'm also incredibly selective about what I read/watch/buy, but I'm still an otaku. Sometimes people use it for ...

It's just a strange mix of cultures, is all. It's like ... fangirl Japanese. I'm an anime geek, myself, and a Japanophile, but I think that the anachronism here is ...

I think it's a good quote, but not a great poem. I'm all about short'n'sweet, but I think this is too short to be called a poem. I love the ...

Kitty, that's my favorite part of writing. (S'funny; people never see the meanings I intend for them to see, they come up with other stuff instead.) ... and, er, sorry, ...

The "Rounded With A Sleep" part, sorry. I recognized the line ( The Tempest is my favorite of Shakespeare's plays), and I was wondering why you chose it. (For the ...

Isn't Dracula one of the original vampires, or at least, the "classic" vampire? How'd you mean it's "ruined" vampires? Anyway, I understand that "dawn" here is symbolic, but I think ...