Meep(:

Hi pizcofriends! This story was great! I think you got some dates mixed up. If you're going to use real historical dates, Make sure that the events make the real ...

Hey Venak! Well, this story truly is how love consumes to the point of irrationality and insanity. Very, very...morbid. I didn't cringe when I read how he tortured his best ...

Hiya there! First story: Oh wow :D Beautifully poignant. Definitely my favourite. It was really intense. This has the best potential to develop into a full-length story, With a detailed ...

*thinks* Does this story belong here? Because it seems to suit the *ahem* romance fiction forum. Anyway: I'm running short on time, so I'll have to give you a brief ...

Hey there fellow Greeter! I haven't found any mistakes thus far :D Anyway, that was captivating. I was clinging on to every word of the story. It was certainly interesting ...

grimy, It's a 2:1 ratio, and we also have another rule where you avoid chatspeak, so do spell your words out properly ;) Another thing, capitalise your words properly. We ...

Well, it seems no one has pointed this out: Hey spike, YWS has a rule you should note: Avoid chatspeak and capitalise your words appropriately. We want to encourage good ...

*grins goofily* Hey Adna, My level of profoundness epically fails to reach yours. Though I may not entirely comprehend the story, I didn't find any mistakes with spelling, grammar, punctuation ...

Hey there, music_lover! Just wanted to inform you, that I've noted your entry, and also I'd advise you put a spacing between the dialogue, So that it's easier on everyone's ...

Salesperson: (in a good mood) Just sign here... and here... Here also, but in print. And right here... And you are done with all the paperwork! It was a pleasure ...

This was...epic. Beautifully brilliant. Short and utterly sweet. I didn't spot any other mistakes aside from what June had pointed out. *starts to cry* I'd give you 2 gold stars ...

"He's so awesome!" They'd cry. "Hail the awesome one!" Came another shout. "His awesomeness rivals the awesomeness of even the most awesome!" Was another thing they'd say. Well, the first ...

It was a damp and dismal day as Smiley mad his way to work, which was a coat-hanger factory. [I believe you meant: It was a damp and dismal day ...

Setting An old graveyard with dense fog hanging low near the ground. There are wrought iron gates with a crow sitting atop. There is only one gravestone with no name, ...

I know it sucks a lot. Lol my first one. Bahaha I am inspired by Meep(: so you might find mine similar to her. Ahaha, thanks, I'm honoured. Seems a ...