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This story was not bad... But rather erm...whats the word...shallow. As in, the characters were not given more descriptions and elaborations, Develop the story more. Like some have pointed out, ...

Excellent. I love all the emotions. I can actually feel really really sorry for the pitiful Hades, Even though he's been made so infamous. And the sweet Persephone became stubborn ...

CAT!!! Must you always make me cry? Meow ._. You seem to have a knack for rather...melancholic things. *sniff, sob* But then again, I cry a lot. Even when I'm ...

Hey Bickazer! This chapter, though with not a huge amount of relevance to your main story, Is still very well written. I could appreciate Ludwig's story on its own, Separate ...

Oh cool oh cool. A totally different perspective of the story. My mind is already going wild with guesses. You sure know how to hook a reader :) Or maybe ...

You are right, this type of story is your element. Very well written. Haunting...intense...and just wow. The descriptions of Vana were particularly disturbing, But very realistic. Kind of morbid. Dark

OH wow. Very beautifully written. Very enigmatic and like what they say: haunting. I felt like I was in a dream or something. I didn't think I found any mistakes ...

Wow. You are a truly gifted writer, KJ. Your descriptions were so succinct, I could picture everything vivdly in my head. You used very appropriate words an just...WOW. I love ...

Meow meow :) Oh wow. So sad. Thanks for making me cry. *sniffs, reaches for tissue paper* I liked it a lot. IF I can give you any advice, It ...

Awesome! I love your story idea. Not the run-of-the-mill type. Credits go to your prologue. If you hadn't written that so well, I wouldn't be reading this. It drew my ...

Hey ashleylee! Once again, you have the gift of carrying out your stories in way that Totally captures my attention down to the very last word. It's still early in ...

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! It seems like the best so far, to me. Your story is coming along very well, I see. I love how you portrayed Dora, And her ...

Hey emozemo, Firstly, Thanks Nutty for pointing out the errors! Your story is... baffling. I couldn't really make out anything about the character, And with all due respect, you need ...

Hello! Your fanbase is here :) I laughed and reached up from underneath the blanket to gently caress his face, reminding him that I’d seen him last the day before. ...

That was so cool! Though I really really wish you guy wouldn't leave us with cliff hangers :) I got a bit confused at the start with who is who, ...