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Hello there! It's late, so this is the last review I'm writing. Please bear with me if I'm blur or anything xD David lifted me into his arms and I ...

Hello there! Oh dear, I'm afraid I won't be of much help because I don't really have any issues with this! It's a lovely read of an aftermath, requiring no ...

Hello there! Let's see what I can do to help! This is rather short, so there isn't much to say except: 1) You switch points of view without clear signposting. ...

Oof, looks like Dudette has covered most of the points. But anyway, hi! I'd just like to reiterate one point she mentioned: While this is intended to be a short ...

Hello! Your piece has been rather extensively critiqued, so I don't have much room left. Anyway, I was wondering if you plan to make this part of a novella/novel or ...

Hey there, I won't comment much on this piece, simply because it's a personal thing for you and not something really subject to edits when it's heartfelt. However, from a ...

Hey Elinor! :D I'll try not to repeat what's been said already. I’d definitely gotten more into my character then the night before. 'than', not 'then'. Anyway, I liked this ...

I've got to agree with what BBB said. This is at best a random blog post that doesn't belong in this section, The Lounge maybe, if you're genuinely looking for ...

Hello! Let's see what I can do for you today! Love, as it turns out, is an overwhelmingly complicated subject , Full-stop? one that doesn't appear to get any easier ...

Ah, this is a lovely piece of writing. As mentioned by others, I can feel the connection between the speaker and the person she's addressing (in this case, the first ...

Hi there! This is rather short, but I'll see what I can comment on and hopefully it helps ^^ Let's go! Yes, like petrol. It seeps in with an assurance, ...

Hi :D I should be doing math so I'll just talk about the plot! Bad: Erm, your characters are generic. The popular quarterback with the gorgeous cheerleader kind of thing ...

Lumiii! I don't think I've ever reviewed anything of yours yet, but I suppose I can always start now! I almost got scared reading some of your points, wondering if ...

Ah, what to say. I enjoyed it. I've not read the other reviewers' comments, so pardon me if I'm repetitive! 1) From your previous works and this one, I feel ...

Hi there, I'm dropping by for a brief review :) I will only comment on the plot: 1) Originality I liked the general idea of this piece, not the run-of-mill ...