MeatBunCat

I'm a little confused as to why Mist is so mute in the first half and only speaks through her thoughts. At first I thought maybe she was paralyzed somehow ...

I dunno what you mean by linear, unless you were expecting this to be a multi choice story. The protagonist as a male showed next to no emotion (I tried ...

Thank you for the review and your thoughts! So- all in all, a lovely first chapter. Looking forward into reading more of your stories later on. Thank you! I hope ...

Thank you for the error spots!

I'm gonna need a lot of points for this story, so do you want me to review anything of yours?

Yay for death kitties! Thank you for sharing.

The story! (if you want to swap fandoms, send me a pm. : D)

Anything in particular you like? (I'm a nerd too :P)

Thank you for reading my story!

Yes! :D

OH! If you've like I could send you an @ when I post new chapters.

I still think a bouncer is meant to be a big mean looking guy to scare people from ever wanting to fight in the first place. But if you're sure. ...

I'm sure there's soooo much he/she never thought about before that's going to be influencing them, beyond the voice. Yeah, I've been annoying boys to see what sorts of things ...

Another trope I wouldn't mind seeing overturned: can the big powerful paladin who saves our protag be a woman instead? And if he has to be a man, can he ...

Thank you for your thoughts!