MeadowLark

Heya! Thanks for the PM. I didn't find this chapter...ugh. I believe that's how you described it. The others pointed out everything so there is, once again, nothing for me ...

Heya! I loved reading this! It's now, officially, one of my favourite stories. Ahem, now onto the nit-picks. They've really already been caught above so there isn't much left for ...

Hey there! Whew! I haven't reviewed anything in awhile. This was excellent and had my attention right away. But I have some nit-picks. “Hello?” She called out. You don't need ...

Hey there Dreami! Oh, I know exactly how Ella feels, except the horse I got bucked off of wasn't even broke to ride... Let's see if I can find something ...

This was good! I didn't find it too confusing. But I was totally surprised at what happened. I had a feeling (from the last part) that Holly was staying in ...

Hey there! I'm not good at critiquing poetry or lyrics. So I'm just basically gonna tell you what I thought of this. It was beautiful yet so sad. It kinda ...

Heya! I really like the storyline so far. But I think you could go into more detail on what the town looks like. Or even the gathered people. Is there ...

Heya Dream! Thanks for the PM! This chapter was just as good as the others! I love the humour you put into these, they're great! I'm sorry, but I couldn't ...

Heya Saph! Great story, I enjoyed reading it. Let me see if I can find some nit-picks. That's so fun to do. You have awesome description of the field and ...

Heya Pippie! Another wonderful chapter! This one had me sitting on the edge of my seat, no doubt about it. It was sort of creepy. Let's see if I can ...

Heya blackpencil! This sounds much better! You removed those long, telling paragraphs and focused more on the MC. Another thing I noticed was how you changed the scene between Kirthin ...

Heya Saph! This was a nice piece. Really it was. Not much I can say as everyone else beat me too it. It's a new thing for me to read ...

Heya! This was an interesting story. I really enjoyed reading it but (yes a but. There is always a but) I found some problems (if you wish to call them ...

I agree with you on the puppy mills! It's totally wrong with what people do to animals. But it isn't just dogs. Chickens, pigs, turkeys, you name it. Factory farming ...

I don't care what the others say. This was pretty amusing and believe you me. I live with a younger brother and small nieces and a nephew who makes jokes ...