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It's fine, I do that sort of thing all the time. I might post one or two of them...most of them are either unfinished or from like 3 years ago ...

I do mention him shaving, but it's an easy mistake to make. Since there isn't anyone else to say his name, I have no idea how to make it clear ...

Thank you for your review! I will try to do a better job explaining.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's not my first work, but it's the first one I would consider letting anyone else see. :P I'll try to make my ...

Wow, I actually really like this like that! He's playing Pachabell's Canon, right? I love being able to hear the song in my head as I read. This is really ...

I actually think the journal thing works really well. As for your other comments, I totally see where you're coming from.

Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you liked it! You're right in that the past tense is forced. I realized that about 3/4 of the way through, ...

Anyone know how to make an interrobang on a keyboard? And I absolutely loved this poem, by the way.

No problem! It actually cheered me up a lot. I wasn't feeling great that day. So thanks for writing it!

It's pretty good already! But yeah, it will improve on here. :P

Oh, okay, the notes make a lot more sense now. And this is actually pretty good since you wrote most of it years ago.

Sorry about that, it double-posted for some reason.