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Hi mintyleaf, thanks for the review! I just wanted to let you know that this story is an original novel and not based on the Wings of Fire series at ...

Thank you for the review! I went and read "Hazel Tells Laverne" because I was curious, and I really enjoyed it, so thanks for the recommendation.

Thank you for the review. I'm really glad this spoke to you so strongly. I was worried the dual gratitude/grief thing wouldn't make sense but I'm glad you caught that ...

Wow, the right-hand alignment here is extremely visually striking and has a great effect. What was your thought process behind that? (Also, this poem describes my high school experience better ...

MY HEART there will be a coherent review on this eventually, but first I need to recover ngl this book has made me feel more than the last 5 published ...

“I apologise,” he said evenly. “But I don’t think that would be a good idea.” YOU ARE RIPPING OUT MY HEART DON'T YOU KNOW

for the record: YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO MAKE ME SYMPATHIZE WITH VIE thank you (and if that weren't enough you then add the dead posies why)

Thank you very much!

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it the chapter. :D It's good to know that line about the McGuffin is a bit over-the-top - I sort of ...

One specific thing I think you could do to differentiate them better is physical description. Mea. Why you gotta make me describe things :p I know the struggle but it's ...

Yeah, that thought is what made me go "oh, I have to comment on this," because the way you handle it is really unique and made me realize something about ...

No problem! Thanks for clarifying - I definitely see what you meant by that line now. :)

Ah, I see. Huh, it's interesting that Vie is willing to cut corners like that, because she's always come across to me as wanting to very strictly do things The ...

I was shocked/angry enough I had to go complain about it to my siblings late last night, so that's how you know you've done something right. xD

Oh good, I'm glad that makes sense! Re: Dante saying where he is - the "come find me" and the fact that it's been so long since he'd written meant ...