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Ooh, your suggestions for descriptions are great. :D

Yeah, Nikka is the town where Ayda lives. xD Thanks for the review!

Chapter 5 is out of the Green Room by now, so no worries. ;)

xD Yeah, I wondered if you'd skipped it on purpose. On humans and magic: You don't know this since it was explained earlier, but humans have the same capability as ...

Thank you for the review! :D

Huh. That's funny that the letter sounds like my voice. Definitely something that needs fixing. As far as talk of the foreshadowing goes, I think it's all right if it's ...

Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you like the last lines, since I wasn't so sure about them. (On the topic of squirrels and Japan - I can confirm ...

Hm, you saying you're finding it hard to sink into Ayda's emotions made me go back and realize how bad this chapter is in terms of not being in deep ...

I say this because this chapter ends with the call to action, literally ("The only thing left to do was act"). This is a really interesting point that I had ...

Hm, it's not exactly common knowledge yet that Madeline's here - rumors have started to spread, and the Lord and Lady have some people traveling through the area specifically looking ...

I'm glad you like the name change! And everything else too xD

It's totally okay that you're behind! Glad you're liking this. :D

Okay, so this is so helpful you have no idea. Particularly your points about body language, and I had honestly never thought that a good way to show how serious ...

Thanks for the review! I realize I only implied this, but Xaniphe's research team knows about Madeline (if they didn't, they wouldn't be as useful). Ayda's not supposed to tell ...

Thank you for the review!