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So, you're absolutely right - June is a complete non-entity. The reason is, she's not going to stick around very long. I originally had her be a character I'm introducing ...

Ah, that makes sense! And this poem is totally new - it wasn't written for the last Writing Olympics. But that image has stuck with me ever since then because ...

Thank you sooo much! This was really great. :D I'm particularly glad that the transition from the disjointed style to the smoother style worked pretty well for you. Could you ...

You're very welcome! I'm glad it was helpful. :D

Hm, yeah, I can see why that could make it too obvious. What you generally want before a reveal like this is either a foreboding tone to foreshadow the disaster ...

I saw the title of this in your wall post and immediately scrolled down to check the copyright date. Didn't even have to read it to know :P

Thanks for the reviews! :D I'll be sure to remind you.

Thank you thank you! I was really hoping this worked as an opening because it just gives the vibe I want for the story. I also heavily based the descriptions ...

Sorry for taking a few days to get around to this, but I'm here now! This is definitely a lot better! The focus on Ren really helped me understand his ...

Haha thank you so much I totally forgot about the request so don't worry.

Thank you very much for your honest feedback - I've really appreciated it this whole time. I've been thinking a lot about what you said in this review, but I'll ...

Sort of. It was originally a gender neutral plural pronoun, used to refer to a group of people of any combination of genders. Since English lacks a singular gender neutral ...

That makes a lot more sense! I think the key is that once you've mentioned at the beginning that they're a tiger and described the way he stretches out lazily ...

This is perfect on so many levels.

Yes, I think so! I like that it's from Nyssa's point of view because I feel her goals and emotions are the more complex and interesting ones in the scene. ...