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All right! I'll be here when it's ready. :)

Thank you as always! Your suggestions are really on point. Re: the chapter ending in a weird place, yeah, I just needed to break it up because I didn't want ...

Awesome! I'm glad I could help. :D

Yeah, I don't really want you to get rid of that point either. There might be some parts of it you could re-word so the paragraph feels like it builds ...

Okay I need the next part of this like stat.

Great, I'm glad I could help! Looking at this again, I definitely like this version more. The paragraph format is more readable and overall I can tell you've gone through ...

I wondered if those expressions were British lol. They felt British but I hadn't come across them before. I think with the pronoun trouble, it's only because it's the first ...

You're welcome! Glad it was helpful. :) On the technology thing, idk, I'm in a small town right now and have been to a fair share of others, and everyone ...

Thanks so much as always.

So I read the first part through again, and yes, that is definitely a lot clearer! And I'm so glad my review was so helpful. :D I'm sure you'll ease ...

I love this and I love Hildegarde. Just thought you should know. :) (I actually really love Dante too. Poor Dante, he has to put up with all of Hildegard's ...

Ohmygosh, I loved Uglies too when I was younger! Its opening line is still my favorite thing ever.

If I'm honest, I really love this chapter too because of how darn flirty Jade is. It is so her personality and it makes me laugh every time Oops on ...

:D Yay! I didn't actually know you loved post-apocalyptic worlds! I'm so happy you like this and now I'm just grinning.