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Re: Society Only By Name- Part Two: The Dregs
Hey, back again to review this second part. So, I thought this part was an improvement on the last, basically because everyone already has a general concept of what the ...
Fri Mar 04, 2016 10:55 am -
Re: Whims of the Soul: Chapter 2
Hi! I'm here to get this out of the Green Room! So, I really like this, and I'm not just saying it. I really like your narration style - it's ...
Thu Mar 03, 2016 10:26 am -
Re: White Bird Ch.2
Hey there! I'm here to get this out of the Green Room for you! So, first off, I like the current structure your chapters have. Typically, it's not a good ...
Thu Mar 03, 2016 6:41 am -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 22
Hey there! If you remember, I reviewed one of your chapters a while back, and now I've come again! Let's get into it. I thought this was overall good - ...
Wed Mar 02, 2016 12:49 pm -
Re: Across the Void: Part 4
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this. So, I'll admit up front to not having read previous parts, but other than it being a bit of a ...
Wed Mar 02, 2016 12:11 pm -
Re: Society Only By Name- Part One: The Darlings
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. So, I like this piece, but I can see why it's hung out in the Green Room for a while, as it's ...
Tue Mar 01, 2016 10:58 am -
Re: This is a Love Story - Part 4
Hi! I'm here for a quick review to get this out of the Green Room. So, as a little aside, I noticed that this is part 4, but I didn't ...
Tue Mar 01, 2016 9:34 am -
Re: DUET :Chapter 16:
Okay, I'm back again! So, I really liked this chapter. Even though I haven't read very much of this series, I could definitely feel the characters' personalities, and especially the ...
Mon Feb 29, 2016 10:59 am -
Re: Color Photographs, Chapter Seventeen
Hey there! I'm back again! So, I think this is a good continuation. I like the talk Meyer and Reneve had while they were driving - it definitely had that ...
Sun Feb 28, 2016 11:12 pm -
Re: Color Photographs, Chapter Sixteen
Hi! I'm back again. So, another good, action-packed chapter. I'm getting excited to read what happens next. The main thing I noticed about this chapter was a lack of internal ...
Sun Feb 28, 2016 10:47 am -
Re: Rose (Full Text)
Hey there. So, I'm a massive fan of Doctor Who, and it's always great to find another Whovian on here. I like the internal narration here - I've seen some ...
Sun Feb 28, 2016 7:52 am -
Re: Color Photographs, Chapter Fifteen
Hey there! I'm back! I did read through the parts between this one and the last one I reviewed, but I decided not to review them, because I couldn't really ...
Sun Feb 28, 2016 6:34 am -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 28
Hi! I'm here to knock this out of the Green Room. Apologies for not having read previous chapters. So, in the beginning of the chapter, I could tell this needed ...
Sun Feb 28, 2016 12:11 am -
Re: Begin again
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review to get this out of the Green Room for you. So, I don't see many lyrics on YWS, and when I do ...
Sun Feb 28, 2016 12:00 am -
Re: Le Zombeh Flick
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. So, what you have here is pretty funny. I like the dynamic between the two main characters. The main problem is...a lot ...
Sat Feb 27, 2016 12:58 pm