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Hi there! I'm here for the review you requested. My first thoughts on the introduction was first, that it was a little overdramatic (that sort of imagery is better to ...

Back again, finally - sorry about the wait. This was definitely a step up from your previous chapters. Giving us just two characters to focus on and one topic (the ...

And back again, as always. a quick check of the higher planes proved her theory. We know for a fact that humans can't see the higher planes, and there's not ...

I am here at last! This is... interesting. The overall feeling I came away with was that every one, most particularly Terna, was pretty much overreacting. And maybe this would ...

All right, let's dive into this. :) Apologies in advance if I don't finish this as soon as you thought I might - I want to give this a fairly ...

Oooh coolio I really like how the dimensions thing makes it so this can take place in the real world without it not fitting with all the stuff that happened ...

I decided I'd go ahead and review these today. :) She loved magic. This opening line and the next paragraph didn't sell me, especially since I already knew this was ...

Hey there! Thought I'd stop by to review this today. This is rather good as it is, particularly the beginning and the ending. The opening part in italics did a ...

Hey! Back for another review. Okay, so realizing they're literally arguing about Pluto (right?) was just funny to me because of the whole planet/not a planet argument. I want to ...

Here for the review, as promised. :D I'll admit the capitalized They as a pronoun was a little distracting. It's just the combination of two abnormal things - 'they' being ...

Back again. This one's an interesting beast. On some levels I really like what you have here, but it doesn't quite make it for me. I read through your other ...

This is quite nice. Definitely a classic example of taking a simple, commonplace moment and exploring it, in this case driving along in December. That said, I don't feel a ...

All right, here's the start of the rest of the reviews I owe you. They'll probably be kind of short, as I'm realizing how much I actually prefer reviewing prose. ...

I enjoyed this. It kept my attention for the most part - more on that later - and yeah, basically I'm intrigued. Your beginning is interesting. This clearly is not ...

Hey there! I'm finally here for the review you asked me for a while back. I agree with Jyva - your prose often strays into purple prose. Some of it ...