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Hey there! I've sort of decided I'm going to follow this novel, seeing as there's so many parts posted and I'm fresh in need of things to review. Hope that's ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review this Review Day. I won't spend too long on technical things, but I spotted a few typos in this piece, things like ...

Hey there! This has been in the Green Room for a while, so I figured I'd review it. Overall, I felt like the first few paragraphs took a while to ...

Huh. That was an interesting chapter. At first I didn't like Daegar - he seemed abrasive and a little rash. It might have been the comment about saving the lord's ...

And back again. :) This part didn't engage me in the way the last two did. I think there are a few different reasons for that. First is that this ...

Back again! This was another good chapter. Honestly, I'd prefer that you break these up into 2 parts because they'd be easier to review, but I can understand that there's ...

Hello! I noticed that a lot of these later chapters were still in the Green Room, and I felt like reviewing some more prose, so here I am. I have ...

All right, back for the last one so far. :D (And YES this means I'll have rescued a Hamlet in KoTGR.) Also, thanks for 'liking' the reviews - it actually ...

Well. That escalated quickly. So, we get a name now, Raptor. Although I'm guessing that's not his real name, him being a magician and all. Honestly, he handled that really ...

Okay, so I kinda wish this part was from Barty's viewpoint, but I also can totally get that you couldn't really do his voice justice without it being in first ...

Back again! This part is short and sweet, so this might be a shorter review. I'm also really happy to see the two together again. Something I felt was odd ...

It's Bartimaeus! :D Yay! Also, so she's not Steve. Oh well. And sorry, because this review is mostly going to be a discussion of the mechanics you've introduced and what ...

Ooh, she's in Minecraft! And she's Steve, apparently. I assume. You'd think she'd be able to be Alex, but maybe it's just automatically the default. I really liked how she ...

I'm back again. :D I'm liking how you're building May and Herobrine's friendship. Something I will say is that Herobrine feels really neutral a lot of the time, like he ...

Hi there! I'm here for the review you requested. My first thoughts on the introduction was first, that it was a little overdramatic (that sort of imagery is better to ...