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Okay, let's get into this. While this is definitely a huge improvement, which is why I upvoted it, I also think you could refine it even more. Your questions: 1. ...

Hey Nite! I thought I'd review this today. So... I actually don't think I like this version better than the last one, and maybe it's just because you didn't have ...

Hey! Time for another review. And wow. I feel like this chapter practically shouted "the plot starts now!" These are definitely new depths to Terna's character. ‘We will not sit ...

Hey there! I figured I'd stop by and review this today. A lot of your insights here are very powerful, and the point you make is absolutely essential. Talking about ...

Hey Light! I am back again, as always, to keep reviewing. :D Ah, the stakes are becoming ever higher now. Right now, I feel like I still have very little ...

So he's perfect, she's got the job, and whatever you do, don't go on the third floor. (I give it about 3 weeks at best before she snaps. And... okay, ...

Hi there! I remember I reviewed the first chapter of this a while back, and then I was looking for something to review and stumbled across this. So let's get ...

Hey! I figured I'd go ahead and review another part of this, since I was looking for something to review today. To me, this chapter kind of lacked tension. First, ...

Hello, fellow competitor. :D Let's get started. Plot I really felt like your ending was rushed. Basically because Mia realizes that oh, he doesn't like her and he just needs ...

Hey nite! I figured I'd do this piece as the first of my reviews for the contest. So yeah, this is great. It's really super-sweet, and I didn't find it ...

Hey there! I decided I'd give this a quick review today. So I see that this is a review of a film called Citizen Soldier. I've never seen the film, ...

Hey there! Guess I'm reviewing your review today. :P So, I like your casual tone and the structure of this review. The detail is great and I'm sure if I ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this today. This is touching. The subject matter is both intensely personal and almost universal - everyone has ...

Hi Light! Don't worry, I'll be gentle this time. So... I'm guessing the entity wants to conquer the Solar System. :P I'm honestly a little confused by the entities. What ...

Hey fortis! Thanks for letting me know about this one.