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Hey fortis! I was looking for something to review today and your tag made me remember this! So I'm really happy that we get to see what some of the ...

Okay, let's get into this. While this is definitely a huge improvement, which is why I upvoted it, I also think you could refine it even more. Your questions: 1. ...

Hey Nite! I thought I'd review this today. So... I actually don't think I like this version better than the last one, and maybe it's just because you didn't have ...

Hey! Time for another review. And wow. I feel like this chapter practically shouted "the plot starts now!" These are definitely new depths to Terna's character. ‘We will not sit ...

Hey there! I figured I'd stop by and review this today. A lot of your insights here are very powerful, and the point you make is absolutely essential. Talking about ...

Hey Light! I am back again, as always, to keep reviewing. :D Ah, the stakes are becoming ever higher now. Right now, I feel like I still have very little ...

So he's perfect, she's got the job, and whatever you do, don't go on the third floor. (I give it about 3 weeks at best before she snaps. And... okay, ...

Hi there! I remember I reviewed the first chapter of this a while back, and then I was looking for something to review and stumbled across this. So let's get ...

Hey! I figured I'd go ahead and review another part of this, since I was looking for something to review today. To me, this chapter kind of lacked tension. First, ...

Hello, fellow competitor. :D Let's get started. Plot I really felt like your ending was rushed. Basically because Mia realizes that oh, he doesn't like her and he just needs ...

Hey nite! I figured I'd do this piece as the first of my reviews for the contest. So yeah, this is great. It's really super-sweet, and I didn't find it ...

Hey there! I decided I'd give this a quick review today. So I see that this is a review of a film called Citizen Soldier. I've never seen the film, ...

Hey there! Guess I'm reviewing your review today. :P So, I like your casual tone and the structure of this review. The detail is great and I'm sure if I ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this today. This is touching. The subject matter is both intensely personal and almost universal - everyone has ...

Hi Light! Don't worry, I'll be gentle this time. So... I'm guessing the entity wants to conquer the Solar System. :P I'm honestly a little confused by the entities. What ...