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Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a review on this fine review day. You have an interesting style of writing, and the basic concept of the story of ...

Hey there! I saw this was Sherlock fiction, so of course I had to drop by and review. So far, I'm really enjoying this. Both John and Sherlock are very ...

Hey there! I thought I'd go ahead and do another review. So, I'd honestly and seriously ask yourself if the flashback scene at the beginning of the chapter needs to ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a review on this. Honestly, this was pretty darn good. I like the emotional tension between Logan and Julia. Just from the ...

Hey there, Chie! I don't think I've ever actually reviewed something you've written, so maybe this will be an adventure for both of us. :D I'm probably what you'd call ...

Hey there! Thought I'd drop by and review this. I like this a lot, honestly. You have a good sense for dramatic timing. The story opens at just the right ...

Hmm, I'm a bit torn on this chapter. On the one hand, it's nice to get Ilal's family finally laid out. Seriously, it cleared up a lot of things for ...

Hi Lightsong! Let's get this one reviewed. Okay, so the main thing that distracted me throughout the whole chapter was that I could not keep track of the place names. ...

Hai! So I haven't reviewed since the beginning of April, so I may be rusty. You have been warned. The good: This story has so many ideas packed into it ...

Hey there! I thought this looked interesting, so I figured I'd go ahead and quickly review it today. What drew me into this was the character and the way you ...

Hey there! I thought I'd go ahead and review this since I enjoyed the previous chapters and needed something to review today. So, something that sort of distracted me while ...

Well this has been out of the Green Room for a while. Guess that teaches me to procrastinate my reviewing. :P 1. Yes. I really liked how it's just a ...

Hey! Let's go ahead and get started with this review. So, one of the first things I thought while reading this is that the beginning felt really sparse, slightly choppy. ...

Hey there, I thought I'd go ahead and leave a quick review. So, to start off, I really liked this. You start right off by grounding us in the world ...

Hey! I figured I'd drop by and review this today. I went ahead and read through the prologue and chapter one, too. So this was great. You did a really ...