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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 6.2: Ilami

    Hey Light! I'm here as always for my review. :D I like how we get to see more of the school in this chapter - it just fleshes out the ...

    Mon Sep 18, 2017 10:24 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Little Miss Brown Eyes - 1

    Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. Your opening : Your main character's voice is the strongest part of this chapter. Straight off the bat, ...

    Sun Sep 17, 2017 12:00 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: There's a Fine Line Chapter 1.1 (Swearing warning)

    Hey there! I thought I'd drop by with a quick review today. I believe this is fanfiction, so I apologize in advance for not being familiar with the original work. ...

    Fri Sep 15, 2017 11:20 pm
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: The Realm of Lousy Characters, Intro Part 2

    And I'm back for part 2! So I'm still seriously wondering who Emma is. She's the leader of the group, yeah, but she doesn't seem to be one of the ...

    Fri Sep 15, 2017 8:46 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 6.1: Ilami

    Back for another review! Ilami nodded, her mouth a flat line. ‘It is.’ She looked at the book. ‘I guess I don’t need this after all. Felaris might’ve taught Alyosha ...

    Fri Sep 15, 2017 12:39 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Ballad of the Brenerit Curfew - Chapter 2.1

    Hey Biscuits! I thought I'd drop by and review this today. I went ahead and read through the first chapter as well. Stuff I liked : I liked the voices ...

    Wed Sep 13, 2017 10:13 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Wrong Era: Chapter 6

    Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for another quick review today, continuing on from where I left off. Jenifer comes across as pretty creepy, which I'm assuming is intentional, ...

    Wed Sep 13, 2017 2:25 am
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Showing and Telling - How to Tell Effectively

    Since I encouraged you to post this, I thought it'd be only fair to drop by with a review on it. The Good : This was definitely a helpful article. ...

    Tue Sep 12, 2017 1:41 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 4.2

    Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a review on this today. This was interesting to read. You do a good job of keeping us in suspense until we ...

    Mon Sep 11, 2017 1:30 am
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Wrong Era: Chapter 5

    Hey there! I'm here for a quick review today! I haven't read previous parts, so I'll try to work with what I can from just this. I like Cecilia - ...

    Sun Sep 10, 2017 11:16 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 17.2 - Something Good

    Hey there! I thought I'd drop by and review this completely out of context. My favorite thing about this was the Peter and Nyssa's interactions - they feel well-rounded and ...

    Sun Sep 10, 2017 10:58 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 5.3)

    Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. And thanks for the summary at the beginning! It was very helpful. So this was a pretty interesting ...

    Sun Sep 10, 2017 8:34 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 5.2: Gael

    Yay! Another part for me to review. :P He choked hearing that. Closing his eyes, he said, ‘I don’t have a blessing. I’m a loner.’ He paused. ‘You’re right. I ...

    Sat Sep 09, 2017 11:37 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: Unnatural Enemies: Part 3 (Ending)

    Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. This was pretty smooth and engrossing to read overall. Fo one, I didn't even notice it was in ...

    Sat Sep 09, 2017 11:13 pm
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Realistic Re: Treslam (Part 1)

    This is really good. Really, you grabbed my attention from the very beginning and then held it all the way through. I love that you've got dragons and yet it's ...

    Sat Sep 09, 2017 2:08 am


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