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Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. Your opening : Your main character's voice is the strongest part of this chapter. Straight off the bat, ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by with a quick review today. I believe this is fanfiction, so I apologize in advance for not being familiar with the original work. ...

And I'm back for part 2! So I'm still seriously wondering who Emma is. She's the leader of the group, yeah, but she doesn't seem to be one of the ...

Back for another review! Ilami nodded, her mouth a flat line. ‘It is.’ She looked at the book. ‘I guess I don’t need this after all. Felaris might’ve taught Alyosha ...

Hey Biscuits! I thought I'd drop by and review this today. I went ahead and read through the first chapter as well. Stuff I liked : I liked the voices ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for another quick review today, continuing on from where I left off. Jenifer comes across as pretty creepy, which I'm assuming is intentional, ...

Since I encouraged you to post this, I thought it'd be only fair to drop by with a review on it. The Good : This was definitely a helpful article. ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a review on this today. This was interesting to read. You do a good job of keeping us in suspense until we ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review today! I haven't read previous parts, so I'll try to work with what I can from just this. I like Cecilia - ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by and review this completely out of context. My favorite thing about this was the Peter and Nyssa's interactions - they feel well-rounded and ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. And thanks for the summary at the beginning! It was very helpful. So this was a pretty interesting ...

Yay! Another part for me to review. :P He choked hearing that. Closing his eyes, he said, ‘I don’t have a blessing. I’m a loner.’ He paused. ‘You’re right. I ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. This was pretty smooth and engrossing to read overall. Fo one, I didn't even notice it was in ...

This is really good. Really, you grabbed my attention from the very beginning and then held it all the way through. I love that you've got dragons and yet it's ...

Hey there and welcome to the site! I thought I'd drop by to review this chapter one today. I liked the dynamic between Kape and Manis in the second scene. ...