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Hey there! I thought I'd drop by and leave a quick review this fine review day. The first think I wanted to say is your opening two paragraphs had me ...

Hey there! Finally getting around to reviewing this. I wasn't a huge fan of the first scene in this chapter. The dialogue was a lot more awkward than in previous ...

Hey Light! Look at me, being timely today. :P So.... wow! First kiss and everything. Wow. That was a bit unexpected. One of the first things I noticed that I ...

Hey there GrayButterfly! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this. The first thing I wanted to comment on was your opening paragraph! You do a really ...

Hey Lightsong! I'm finally here to review this. Plot and character-wise, this was a really good chapter. It feels like we're getting deeper and deeper into the plot, and now ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for another review. You have a lot of the pieces here, and they're working together really well. You have the engaging main character. ...

Ack, dangit! We were getting so close to having real information, too. (Also sigh, this is out of the Green Room *again* before I get to it. Guess it teaches ...

Hey!!! I'm finally here to review this (and yes, I know this wasn't exactly right after church like I said it would be, so sorry about that). This is really ...

Hey there victoria! I thought I'd leave a quick review on this today. So first off, something I liked right off the bat: how you introduce us to Rae! You ...

Hey there! I'm back again. :) Part of me feels that Maddie is just being paranoid at this point. It feels like she sees ill-wishers and gossipers everywhere and keeps ...

Yay, Zoey! I like her already, of course. And feel a bit bad for her, because wow, Maddie's bitter. What a way to react to someone who's just trying to ...

Hey there! I'm just going to leave a quick review on this and apologize for dropping off the face of the planet when it comes to following this novel. xD ...

AAAAAAHHHHH nooooo what happened to our poor Edna :( Honestly this part was done so well. Because you have her wake up slowly, confused, and that's actually a pretty normal ...

And back again! This'll be the second-to-last of my reviews - I think I owed you six and the next one will be my seventh, but I want to do ...

And I'm back as usual! This chapter is lovely. Edna and Clem bonding this way feels a lot more natural than it did a few chapters ago, even though the ...