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I really like this story so far. I especially liked your opening couple of paragraphs. You start out by describing how she normally wakes up slowly, and how there's normally ...

Hmmm.... this was an interesting story, to say the least. I like what you are trying to do with it. I like how you frame it as someone telling a ...

Hi there! I'm amazed by this piece. It's really imaginative, and I love the odd idea of civilizations rising and falling in my front yard. I would like to know ...

I really like this poem. It so perfectly sums up what I feel music and art does for me, how it brings such joy into my life. I also really ...

Okay, I really like this piece. It provides such a realistic, understandable view of how depressed people think. It was very easy to relate to the characters. There were a ...

Hi there! I'm here to give you a review. First of all, I like your story. It's an engaging idea, and I really want to know how the alien learned ...

Hello! I really like your story. I actually haven't read the first two parts, but I still understood this just fine. I really liked how it built up to the ...

Hi! First off, I think you did a great job of showing how horrible child abuse is. I especially liked how it is all inside her head, with very little ...

Hi there! This was an interesting start to a story. However, some parts of it need work. Your big prologue infodump actually worked okay - it was interesting enough that ...

Hi there! First of all, this was really well written. It was very engaging and exciting to read. I especially liked the first part that we as in present tense. ...

Hi there! I think this is a great start to a piece. Is it going to be a novel? Things that worked well: I liked how indifferent Aleena is to ...

Hi there! So I can easily say that I really liked this. I'm kind of a sucker for these sorts of fanfics. I especially liked how you didn't just undo ...

At times like these, I wish there was a "Love" button, not just a "Like" button. You had me at the first line. I think basically everyone on here can ...

I can relate with this a lot, being both an introvert and the top-of-the-class student. I hate it so much when I have to do group projects, especially when we ...

This is actually really interesting. I love how it's from a five-year-old's perspective, so everything goes completely over his head. I also like how you have set up a complex, ...