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Re: Chapter 2 is a little short
No it was suppose to post but it didn't. I am trying to have the first 2 chapters a dream then I wake up from the dream and go from ...
Oct 17, 2015 -
Re: Ten Reasons Why Nate Is Afraid Of Lampposts
I thought the whole thing was funny. My favorite is the second reason because hey it could happen. LOL . Also I like the contrast of reason 9. Keep on ...
Oct 17, 2015 -
Re: A Slice Of Blood
Your poem is very interesting because it could use a little work. I don't know if this was a informational poem about blood or if this was a comparison with ...
Oct 17, 2015 -
Re: The Infected take over
Thank you for telling me where my flaws are. To be honest I am new to this and if your write you knew us writers can get ahead of ourselves. ...
Oct 17, 2015 -
Re: The Infected take over
Thank you for your review and to be honest I do think that it was a poor decision to go to a refugee camp but I have an idea that ...
Oct 17, 2015