McMourning

In high school English classes in the United States, a works cited page is usually omitted because the entire class including the teacher has the same copy of the book. ...

I like that it is a cross between poetry and a script. I love that each memory is like a scene in a play. I would just like to have ...

I don't really think it matters why the bleachers collapsed. What matters is that you were so close to her when it happened, but you couldn't help. As sad as ...

Hi. I agree with silented1. There are some things that aren't explained. For the most part, however, I think you wrote well. You have a nice flow.

The thing I want to mention, though, is that she goes from being the goddess of purity and love to being the goddess of women and weaving. Which is (was?) ...

The idea is interesting, as is the straw-thing, but I get the feeling this is a part of a much larger story. If it is, are you going to post ...

Thanks so much! I used to dabble in songwriting, but I gave it up (can't remember why). I guess I'll try it again. Thanks!

Thanks! I wasn't really sure which forum to post it in. I'm sorry that I picked the wrong one.

It's okay, I wasn't trying to point at you. I know that you aren't the only one who messed up.

Please, get his name right! Scott Westerfeld is the author of the Uglies Trilogy. There is no author named Scott Westerfield.

Hello, again! Thanks! By now, I've already done that and fixed several punctuation mistakes that weren't caught. That would be why it says I've edited my post 4 times.......odd...I'm not ...

I've updated Chapter 1. As for Chapter 2, something seems to be missing--the end seems to cut off, but I'm not sure where to finish from there. Any suggestions or ...

Sorry, I wasn't thinking that early in the morning. Thanks for pointing that out.

Thanks! I guess I see what you mean about Cass flip-flopping from mean to nice. Thanks and have a great day!

Hello! I read it a few years ago, but only because my cousin had gone to college. See, my Aunt was cleaning out his closet, and came across a bunch ...