Mayfyre

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Thanks for pointing out the type-O :oops: I see what you mean with the rhyme in the second last stanza. The bit you pointed out was just another fun change ...

Thanks a lot for the comments :D I'm really happy you like it, though criticism is definitely welcome :) xx

Thanks for the comment :) Well, when I used moth-voice, I did not really think of it as "the voice of a moth", it was more about implying that the ...

I am impressed. Your use of imagery is great and the rhyming works out very well. It's the first work of yours that I read, but I will definitely keep ...