MaybeAndrew

Thank you so much for the review! I%u2019m glad you picked up on so much, like the Lownire blade and Liams unwillingness to be a Keeper, and how he might ...

I'll be reviewing this before the end of today probably (:

Thank you again for the review Malice! I don't know directly how to describe it as a kind of critique, but at the moment it feels like you're building up ...

Thank you so much for the review malice! You're reviews are super helpful and really get at the problems I want to address so I'm super glad to see one! ...

Yes, @your_localdumbfrog, that is important, but it does seem a bit unrelated. I would suggest for posting ideas like this you use the YWS people tab or just posting your ...

Thanks soooo much for the review malice! I'll be sure to edit those points.

Thank you so much for the review! I agree that the one-month later bits are a bit clunky and I'll edit them. I'm glad you like Liam, his conflict with ...

Oh my gosh! I don't know how this slipped through, but I never got a notification for it! Thank you so much for the review. The capitalization of the Beast ...

Thank you so much for the review! I will be sure to edit those points and make my descriptions more powerful and metaphorical, and less mathematical and netrual. Thanks again!

This review is it's own work of art

Thanks so much for the review Reaper!

I agree that flawed characters are really interesting, one of my favorite books of all time (and also like critically acclaimed as one of the best) The Brother Karmozov has ...

Thanks so much for the review! I too am worried about starting with such a big problem as the death, and I hope to both defuse that and turn it ...

Thank you so much for the review malice! I agree about that warmth bit, I'll edit that now.

Thanks so much for the review! The ents from the lord of the rings has some fun imagery, but this is a bit different (; I like how you are ...