MaybeAndrew

Thank's so much for the review!

Thanks so much for the review icy. YEah, I hadn't written much last week XD, was road tripping, probably should of warned you I wasn't going to be Pming you ...

Thanks again for the review! I'll be sure to edit all of those points. I'm glad you like the light side of Liam, I am worried that this story is ...

Thank you so much for the review! I agree I might describe a *little* too much, and I am trying to figure out if that's something I need to change, ...

Thank you so much for the review Reaper! I'm glad you like Matts like heartedness. About the baby having a full head of hair, it happens XD often times it ...

Thank you so much for the review reaper! About the quotation marks, if it's the same character talking, you don't use close quotation marks at the end of paragraphs just ...

Thank you so much! And no need to apologize for "nitpicking" that's what editing is, nitpicking into perfection! So thank you for your nitpicking (:

Thank you again! I agree that this chapter has boring sentence structure. I'll be sure to edit that!

Thank you so much for the review!

Thank you so much for the review! I'll be sure to edit all of those points!

Thank you sooo much for the review wayward! I'll be sure to edit all those points! Excited to get more of this amazing feedback on future chapters.

Thank you for your review! I'll be sure to make pt 1 and 2 more like this one with the way Liam feels more like he's there.

Thank you for the review. Hmm, I agree that there are point of view problems. I didn't consider switching the POV (like maybe to Sitric) but its not a bad ...

Thank you so much for the review! I agree that the hound bit needs editing! And thanks for answering the questions, feel free not to, I just thought it would ...

Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you like the piece. This was half just a way to try out an idea I have for a novel... so ...