MaybeAndrew

A late welcome to YWS btw!

Thanks! Glad you like it.

Thanks for the review! Ha, you're very kind, and you saying you'll be reading more is actually really motivating to get the rest of this story posted.

Be expecting a Film Noir about this whole experience soon

Thanks so much for the review! I will be sure to edit those lines and stanzas. I definitely agree about the end of the poem, (@lunagirl as well then) this ...

Thanks so much for your review! I just got rid of all of those grammatical mistakes and tried my best to put more showing in! Your right about that, I ...

So, I'm finally (mostly) done with this super short story, it's gonna come in probably like 5 pieces. I would love feedback so I can edit the further pieces before ...

Yes! Get rid of this monotony! I wrote this a couple of months ago when I was really bogged down in boring and pointless feeling tasks! But since then I ...

Thanks so much for the review!

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked the poem.

I wrote this forever ago, I found it today and thought, hey why not put it out. I'm terrible at poetry but I hope you enjoy this.

As a homeschooler who has been to public school I approve of this message

Thanks much for the review! I will be sure to make those changes. Also, late welcome to YWS! If you ever have any questions about the site I'd be happy ...

Thanks much for the review! I will be sure to make those changes. Also, late welcome to YWS! If you ever have any questions about the site I'd be happy ...

Thank you so much! I will definitely try to fix those passing issues. The reason I had the parenthese thing was because this story will normally be told to locals, ...