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Andrew here with your harsh review! FIRST IMPRESSIONS: I liked the second half of the chapter much more than the first, Finch is very likable, the conversation is fun, and ...

We meet at last, aliens. Andrew here, with a review. This chapter is good for finally getting to see the great Other, our antagonists. It raises the stakes and gives ...

ACTION. Andrew here with a review! Things are occurring, glad to see the tension building. I'd only say, like always, I want to feel from inside of the characters heads. ...

Andrew here with another lightning fast review: Or as I like to call it, live view of him just reading your story. TOILET MEETING TIME Overall, I feel like the ...

Andrew here with a lightning-fast review! EEEK WE'RE GETTING SO CLOSE TO AN ACTUAL ESCAPE "Well that's the general idea behind this look. Don’t look so surprised," said Daisy, mock ...

Hey, Andrew here with a review! This was defiantly fun, I liked the narrator's whimsical style of narration, and the generally magical subject matter. I'd say my biggest critiques are ...

WOOOO WIRING IS DAMADGE MRS KANE LETS GET OUR ESCAPE ON. ahem, Andrew here with a review. Excited to see some advancement, maybe this means out party will actual /eyes/ ...

Andrew here for a review! I was glad to discover another chapter floating around I hadn't reviewed. Overall the chapter is fun, the chase scene is exciting, but I would ...

I am sooo so sorry for how late this review came in, poetry.... the holidays... but here I am, finally. To start, I'm a simplistic story man, so poetry is ...

Andrew here for a review! Overall this chapter was interesting, and it was nice to see Harry on the inside a bit more. I'd say, my biggest complaint is that ...

Annnnndrew here for a review! First off, since when did you turn eighteen, just noticed that on your side thing right there, so happy birthday, bet it's fun being an ...

Andrew here with a review. Haha, loooove the concept, and it'll be fun to see a post-apocalypse book written in this whimsical style. The writing style is easy to read, ...

Hey Andrew here with your Harsh review! As always, this is just how I feel, in complete honesty, hope it can help! This is a pretty short work, and the ...

Hey! Andrew here for a review! Welcome to the site! I have to say you really embraced the short part of the short story. I'd almost call this a poem ...

Well harrrrryyy andrew's back. Sorry for the drought of reviews, got sick, had thanksgiving, had to work on ghost walk stuff, and fell in love. It's been a month, to ...