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Hey, Andrew here to review. Sorry for the delay. This is definitely interesting, it gives us some plot to hold on too. I find the non-human main character interesting. I ...

Hey! Andrew here to review. This chapter definitely is a good build-up for the briefcase reavele, but much of it seems forced. Furthermore, our so far very likable duo becomes ...

Hey! Andrew here with a review. I am really liking Terry. The action is well written here if sometimes a tad hard to follow. I really like seeing of Harry ...

Hey! Andrew here to review your peice. Overall the first bit was hard to follow, so many characters doing so many things in so many places. I think I would ...

Hey, here to review your 8th chapter (*wink*) This one had some good character building, but once again a bit rushed. The timeline keeps confusing me, it's been a week? ...

Dang, this was good. Really mysterious, the storm is great, our characters are great, and the end is absolutely fantastic. I'm not entirely sure why this wasn't the first chapter. ...

Hey Harry, I'm here to review your chapter. This was an interesting fight, but I feel like the overprotectiveness of Harry and Rose is getting a little unrealistic. How can ...

Hello! I'm back with a review. Overall, this was an interesting chapter, we have already have two unique characters and some good beginning downtime. I do have two minor critiques/questions. ...

Hey! Andrew here to review your chapter! This was an interesting one, but I have to agree with the others that time was wasted with strange transitions. The dialogue was ...

Hey! Andrew here to review! This defiantly felt magical and mysterious, but once again I struggle to find a plot. We are introduced to a whole new cast of characters, ...

Okay! it's tomorrow and I'm here! So, this chapter was interesting, a bit of downtime, but rushed. Also, I'm pretty confused. You keep saying it's been a week since this ...

Okay, this chapter defiantly had some more teenage wish-fulfillment in the form of apocalypse speeding! (maybe you haven't daydreamed about that but I sure of heck have) but once again, ...

Hey, Andrew here! Welcome back! Glad to see more chapters. This chapter really captures all that zombie apocalypse vibe. It awakened the preper in me. For that, I applaud you. ...

Hey! Andrew here to review your prologue, I might even keep reviewing all the way up to current with you chapters ¯\_(ツ)_/¯, we will see what happens. But to reviewing! ...

I actually have to disagree with the other reviewers, the extreme amount of paragraph breaks may not be completely grammatically correct, but it's darn interesting. It's like poetry, and it ...